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等我post我上年作既詩先

等我post我上年作既詩先

冇人知我作個一首咁既詩
大家覺得有咩唔好就講
我都想知

NO ONE BESIDE          SNITCHING BOY二五仔

A boy having obsessions.
His whole mind is full of depression.
He can’t get the girl that she love,
And everything he began to prejudge.

Without thinking, without considering.
His road become confusing.
Without guider, no one beside,
Including the girl that he love in life.

Days go by he feels sad,
He sits on the chair and think of died.
No one noticed he becomes mad.
Hope one day he can fly,
Being strong to stay in sky,
and all problems are going to say bye.

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支持你post多D +2分
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得2個人睇
點解咁少人

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唔係 只是他們不回帖
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英文詩,太高深了,我看不明白
時間過去不復還,人事盡變空感嘆
關係回復倍感艱, 只餘信仰存心間

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OK wor
Let me post my詩next time
回憶只是遺忘了,並不是被丟棄了,重要的東西是不會被丟棄的,只是埋藏在心靈的深處

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我五回帖系因此    我看五明

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