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我今日作左5首poem,仲有一個自貼problem

我今日作左5首poem,仲有一個自貼problem

點解我delete唔到我之前post d 相~(唔好意思,我delete左d相喇 )
keneth,你唔lyk,delete左我個post啦,plzzzzzzzzz
thank you man


我今日作左5首poem,coz somthin wrong with me
大家去功課交流區睇啦~
五首都係想作比這個論壇既其中一個girl

IM SUCH A FOOL
In internet,
You lie.
At home,
I cry.
I don’t really know who you are.
I don’t really know where you are.
You are innocent.
Am I love you? Yes I do.
I still have feelings on you.
That’s true.

LOVE INFLUENCE~
My heartstring you tugged.
I’m so unluck.
The way to forget pain is drug,
And make me become nuts.
All is cause by LOVE.


EVER,NEVER,HOWEVER,FOREVER~
Ever such a pretty girl.
Never want to forget you.
However you hate me.
However you ignore me.
You are the only girl that I love forever.



LONELY STIFF HEART IN WINTER~
I’m not a kid, and I’m not mad.
How can I trust you and what can I do?
I’m not fool, but a bit cool.
My sweetheart, winter is coming, I gave you my whole body and my whole life.
What can you give back to me?



I hate you, and I’m fed up with you.
Why you left me alone and sailed far over the sea?
There is no sun in my sky.
I can’t forget you, but you never remember me.
You broke my heart! You have broken my heart!


WHAT A DEPRESSION
What a depression!

Everyday I just walked and walked around at home.
My days were silly.
All the time I felt was alone,
Until I heard the ringing phone.

Listening to your voice,
How sweet is your sound!
Looking at your photo,
My heart has been pounded!

I LOVE U.
So am I being in faction or just in fiction?
Am I having obsession?
I want the answer.



我看到一隻平凡的胡碟,但她給我的感覺很特別,我想捉她回來,怎知掉進深淵中,我想:我永遠都要痛苦地在這�堨穻s下去,但仍在想你啊胡碟...............

[ 本帖最後由 二五仔 於 2007-1-22 10:55 PM 編輯 ]

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真係無聊......
好想影彩色相的熊貓

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蝴蝶...
幾好丫,十卜卅.卅
平凡自古多薄意,曲高弦斷少知音

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我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu
好想影彩色相的熊貓

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原帖由 cfong 於 2007-1-22 10:40 PM 發表
我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu
邊個丫>?<
平凡自古多薄意,曲高弦斷少知音

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原帖由 cfong 於 2007-1-22 10:40 PM 發表
我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu
哈哈∼咁叻∼
邊個哇

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原帖由 細an 於 2007-1-22 10:41 PM 發表

哈哈∼咁叻∼
邊個哇
唔講得嫁~會比人打
好想影彩色相的熊貓

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點解我delete唔到d相=.="

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原帖由 cfong 於 2007-1-22 10:43 PM 發表

唔講得嫁~會比人打
哈哈∼
咁嚴重..
不過我幾鍾意哩d詩哎-3-

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原帖由 二五仔 於 2007-1-22 10:49 PM 發表
點解我delete唔到d相=.="
del d咩野相哇

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回復 #10 細an 的帖子

之前d相

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寫得好呀,,
好多都有押韻..
係肉麻左少少囉xdd
sup你呀=)`

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quite good la
but I don't understand some of it...

My English is too bad~~
我是肥人一名...有少少古怪...多多蠢

不喜歡自己一個

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好叻呀!!!
http://freeyclub.com/forum/?fromuid=1631
Best Forum 一定要看!!!!

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我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu
「嚴以律己,也嚴以待人」

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