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標題: 等我post我上年作既詩先 [打印本頁]

作者: 二五仔    時間: 2006-11-23 07:44 PM     標題: 等我post我上年作既詩先

冇人知我作個一首咁既詩
大家覺得有咩唔好就講
我都想知

NO ONE BESIDE          SNITCHING BOY二五仔

A boy having obsessions.
His whole mind is full of depression.
He can’t get the girl that she love,
And everything he began to prejudge.

Without thinking, without considering.
His road become confusing.
Without guider, no one beside,
Including the girl that he love in life.

Days go by he feels sad,
He sits on the chair and think of died.
No one noticed he becomes mad.
Hope one day he can fly,
Being strong to stay in sky,
and all problems are going to say bye.
作者: 鍾倩怡    時間: 2006-11-23 07:52 PM

支持你post多D +2分
作者: 二五仔    時間: 2006-11-24 06:33 PM

得2個人睇
點解咁少人
作者: 鍾倩怡    時間: 2006-11-24 06:43 PM

唔係 只是他們不回帖
作者: 程昱    時間: 2006-11-26 10:42 PM

英文詩,太高深了,我看不明白
作者: FreedomJustice    時間: 2006-11-27 09:59 AM

OK wor
Let me post my詩next time
作者: GUNDAM    時間: 2006-12-3 07:00 PM

我五回帖系因此    我看五明




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