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作者: 二五仔 時間: 2007-1-22 10:34 PM 標題: 我今日作左5首poem,仲有一個自貼problem

點解我delete唔到我之前post d 相~(唔好意思,我delete左d相喇

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keneth,你唔lyk,delete左我個post啦,plzzzzzzzzz
thank you man

我今日作左5首poem,coz somthin wrong with me
大家去功課交流區睇啦~

五首都係想作比這個論壇既其中一個girl

IM SUCH A FOOL
In internet,
You lie.
At home,
I cry.
I don’t really know who you are.
I don’t really know where you are.
You are innocent.
Am I love you? Yes I do.
I still have feelings on you.
That’s true.

LOVE INFLUENCE~
My heartstring you tugged.
I’m so unluck.
The way to forget pain is drug,
And make me become nuts.
All is cause by LOVE.

EVER,NEVER,HOWEVER,FOREVER~
Ever such a pretty girl.
Never want to forget you.
However you hate me.
However you ignore me.
You are the only girl that I love forever.

LONELY STIFF HEART IN WINTER~
I’m not a kid, and I’m not mad.
How can I trust you and what can I do?
I’m not fool, but a bit cool.
My sweetheart, winter is coming, I gave you my whole body and my whole life.
What can you give back to me?

I hate you, and I’m fed up with you.
Why you left me alone and sailed far over the sea?
There is no sun in my sky.
I can’t forget you, but you never remember me.
You broke my heart! You have broken my heart!

WHAT A DEPRESSION
What a depression!

Everyday I just walked and walked around at home.
My days were silly.
All the time I felt was alone,
Until I heard the ringing phone.

Listening to your voice,
How sweet is your sound!
Looking at your photo,
My heart has been pounded!

I LOVE U.
So am I being in faction or just in fiction?
Am I having obsession?
I want the answer.

我看到一隻平凡的胡碟,但她給我的感覺很特別,我想捉她回來,怎知掉進深淵中,我想:我永遠都要痛苦地在這裏生存下去,但仍在想你啊胡碟...............

[ 本帖最後由二五仔於 2007-1-22 10:55 PM 編輯 ]

作者: cfong 時間: 2007-1-22 10:36 PM

真係無聊......

作者: hohin1224 時間: 2007-1-22 10:37 PM

蝴蝶．．．
幾好丫，十卜卅．卅

作者: cfong 時間: 2007-1-22 10:40 PM

我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu

作者: hohin1224 時間: 2007-1-22 10:41 PM

引用:

原帖由 cfong 於 2007-1-22 10:40 PM 發表
我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu

邊個丫＞？＜

作者: 細ａｎ 時間: 2007-1-22 10:41 PM

引用:

原帖由 cfong 於 2007-1-22 10:40 PM 發表
我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu

哈哈～咁叻～
邊個哇

作者: cfong 時間: 2007-1-22 10:43 PM

引用:

原帖由 細ａｎ 於 2007-1-22 10:41 PM 發表

哈哈～咁叻～
邊個哇

唔講得嫁~會比人打

作者: 二五仔 時間: 2007-1-22 10:49 PM

點解我delete唔到d相=.="

作者: ＊ＴＩＮＧ＊﹏ 時間: 2007-1-22 10:49 PM

引用:

原帖由 cfong 於 2007-1-22 10:43 PM 發表

唔講得嫁~會比人打

哈哈～
咁嚴重．．
不過我幾鍾意哩ｄ詩哎－３－

作者: 細ａｎ 時間: 2007-1-22 10:50 PM

引用:

原帖由 二五仔 於 2007-1-22 10:49 PM 發表
點解我delete唔到d相=.="

ｄｅｌ　ｄ咩野相哇

作者: 二五仔 時間: 2007-1-22 10:50 PM 標題: 回復 #10 細ａｎ的帖子

之前d相

作者: @pp 時間: 2007-1-22 10:51 PM

寫得好呀,,
好多都有押韻..
係肉麻左少少囉xdd

sup你呀=)`

作者: nane 時間: 2007-2-20 02:43 AM

quite good la
but I don't understand some of it...

My English is too bad~~

作者: taruru 時間: 2007-4-1 11:32 AM

好叻呀!!!

作者: 精靈女王 時間: 2007-6-29 06:37 PM

我諗我估到果個女仔係邊個lu

作者: 精靈女王 時間: 2007-6-29 06:54 PM

個女仔係sharonron,yes or no?

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